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Jacqueline Peveto

Ground Crew Editorial

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Let’s talk shop. Let’s talk story.

My name is Jackie Peveto, and with my sister, I am one half of Ground Crew Editorial, a twin-engine editorial firm that helps writers take off. Our mission is to help you get off the ground, whether that’s writing the first draft or the next draft, polishing a manuscript, querying agents or indie presses, or self-publishing.

Providing thoughtful, in-depth feedback, I am here to help you find the confidence you need to send your words into the world.

Custom Editing

At Ground Crew, we’re all about excellence, exploration, craftsmanship, enthusiasm, and, most of all, taking time for what really matters.

Just as no two people are alike, every project requires a unique, tailored approach. Using a detailed process, I will encourage you to refine and strengthen your ideas while developing your unique voice and style. My desire is help every writer I work with grow so that the skills you gain during our time together will not only benefit the project at hand but your future endeavors as well. I strive to give clear, valuable feedback that is custom-made for your individual needs and vision. Wherever you are in the writing process, I can help you reach the next step.

Creative Approach

With a master’s degree in creative writing and several years of university tutoring, I bring together a unique blend of literary expertise and a passion for conversations about words. While I specialize in children’s literature (picture books through young adult novels) and adult sci-fi and fantasy, I have worked with writers on a variety of projects including

  • novels (historical, alternate history, fantasy, sci-fi, and more)
  • personal essays
  • academic papers
  • query letters
  • leadership manuals
  • memoir

This range of experience provides me with the versatility and flexibility to give your work the highest level of care.

Experienced and Enthusiastic Writer

Writing is difficult endeavor to say the least, and having someone at your side who knows this path is invaluable. As a member of the Society for Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators (SCBWI), I attend writing conferences and can provide you with up-to-date industry knowledge and resources.

 As a writer, I approach fiction and nonfiction content creation with the same enthusiasm for powerful storytelling, applying all my skills to craft concepts, themes, or information into compelling and persuasive text.


My Services

If you’d like to read the full description of what each of these services entails, please click or tap on the name of the service, and you’ll be taken to the service page.

Developmental Editing

A developmental edit is the most extensive and in-depth critique that you can get for your manuscript. This service includes:

  • An initial consultation call to discuss your goals for your manuscript, your writing history, and what kind of support you’re looking for with your writing.
  • A long editorial letter (15–20 pages) detailing the manuscript’s strengths and weaknesses and suggestions for improvement regarding character/plot development, story structure, etc. to help you take your manuscript to the next level as you revise. This letter also includes a story summary, a discussion of themes and strengths of the book, and recommendations for next steps in the process.
  • In-line reactions, comments, and questions in the manuscript itself using Track Changes.
  • A follow-up Zoom call (30 minutes) to discuss the edit and any questions.

 

Manuscript Assessment

You can think of a manuscript assessment as a developmental edit “lite,” designed to be a more affordable alternative to a full developmental edit. It is also sometimes called a manuscript evaluation. Whether you book an assessment or a developmental edit, you will receive the same depth and scope of critique on your work. The only difference is in the amount of feedback you receive. This service includes:

  • A close read-through of the full manuscript
  • An in-depth editorial letter (5–10 pages) of the overall impression and successfulness of the manuscript, including a tailored discussion of any specific concerns you might have.

 

Line Editing

Line editing is a step down from developmental editing, like a lens zooming in from the big picture to paragraph and sentence level. With this kind of editing, we focus on flow and clarity, with the priority being placed on enhancing the writer’s voice and elevating the story through strong writing. This service includes:

  • A marked-up manuscript with edits made using Microsoft Word’s Track Changes feature, allowing you to see exactly what has been revised and giving you the power to accept or reject any changes.
  • A 2-page editorial letter
  • A thorough style sheet that lists all of the unique names and terms in your manuscript to ensure that they are consistently rendered throughout the book.
  • Extensive line-level revisions that strengthen your writing and refine sentences to improve your manuscript and your writing skills.
  • A review pass for you to look over the edits and ask questions directly on the manuscript.

Copyediting

Copyediting is a close and thorough critique that delves into the mechanics of your work. In the process of editing, this kind of edit should ideally take place just before proofreading—that is, when the manuscript is just about finished and is just in need of a last polish. This service includes:

  • In-line corrections that bring your work to a professional and high quality standard using Microsoft Word’s Track Changes features, allowing you to see exactly what has been revised and giving you the power to accept or reject any changes.
  • A thorough style sheet that lists all of the unique names and terms in your manuscript to ensure that they are consistently rendered throughout the book.
  • A review pass for you to look over the edits and ask questions directly on the manuscript.

Quick Critiques

I offer critiques on your first 500 words or your first ten pages. For the ten-page critiques, a follow-up Zoom call to discuss the feedback is included. For both kinds of critique, you’ll receive 2 pages of feedback touching on the following categories:

  • positive aspects
  • elements for attention and improvement
  • character development
  • plot structure
  • langauge/diction
  • voice
  • next steps

Submission Packages

I also offer reviews on submission materials, including query or cover letters, synopses, and first ten pages. If needed, I can help you identify good comp titles and craft an author bio. A good letter and synopsis are created through a process of asking questions and making comments, so I include two rounds of revisions in this service. After you make changes, I will review them again and send you any remaining edits and comments.

 


Professional Experience

My website

LinkedIn

  • Bachelor’s Degree: English Literature
  • Master’s Degree: English with specialization in Creative Writing
  • Visiting Scholar: studied at Oxford University
  • Published Writer: freelance articles, short stories, poetry
  • SCBWI Volunteer: Presenter for several Connect and Critique meetings and Co-Registrar for RMC Letters & Lines Conference 2022 and 2023
  • 10+ years experience in editing fiction and nonfiction
  • 5+ years of university tutoring and teaching experience across the curriculum
  • Copyeditor for Japan Harvest (official print publication for Japan Evangelical Missionary Association)

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Colorado Springs, CO
US

Email: jackie@groundcreweditorial.com

https://www.groundcreweditorial.com

Years in the field: 10
Years freelancing: 4

jacqueline.peveto.24243

Jacqueline Peveto

 

Ground Crew Editorial Logo

Let’s talk shop. Let’s talk story.

My name is Jackie Peveto, and with my sister, I am one half of Ground Crew Editorial, a twin-engine editorial firm that helps writers take off. Our mission is to help you get off the ground, whether that’s writing the first draft or the next draft, polishing a manuscript, querying agents or indie presses, or self-publishing.

Providing thoughtful, in-depth feedback, I am here to help you find the confidence you need to send your words into the world.

Custom Editing

At Ground Crew, we’re all about excellence, exploration, craftsmanship, enthusiasm, and, most of all, taking time for what really matters.

Just as no two people are alike, every project requires a unique, tailored approach. Using a detailed process, I will encourage you to refine and strengthen your ideas while developing your unique voice and style. My desire is help every writer I work with grow so that the skills you gain during our time together will not only benefit the project at hand but your future endeavors as well. I strive to give clear, valuable feedback that is custom-made for your individual needs and vision. Wherever you are in the writing process, I can help you reach the next step.

Creative Approach

With a master’s degree in creative writing and several years of university tutoring, I bring together a unique blend of literary expertise and a passion for conversations about words. While I specialize in children’s literature (picture books through young adult novels) and adult sci-fi and fantasy, I have worked with writers on a variety of projects including

  • novels (historical, alternate history, fantasy, sci-fi, and more)
  • personal essays
  • academic papers
  • query letters
  • leadership manuals
  • memoir

This range of experience provides me with the versatility and flexibility to give your work the highest level of care.

Experienced and Enthusiastic Writer

Writing is difficult endeavor to say the least, and having someone at your side who knows this path is invaluable. As a member of the Society for Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators (SCBWI), I attend writing conferences and can provide you with up-to-date industry knowledge and resources.

 As a writer, I approach fiction and nonfiction content creation with the same enthusiasm for powerful storytelling, applying all my skills to craft concepts, themes, or information into compelling and persuasive text.


My Services

If you’d like to read the full description of what each of these services entails, please click or tap on the name of the service, and you’ll be taken to the service page.

Developmental Editing

A developmental edit is the most extensive and in-depth critique that you can get for your manuscript. This service includes:

  • An initial consultation call to discuss your goals for your manuscript, your writing history, and what kind of support you’re looking for with your writing.
  • A long editorial letter (15–20 pages) detailing the manuscript’s strengths and weaknesses and suggestions for improvement regarding character/plot development, story structure, etc. to help you take your manuscript to the next level as you revise. This letter also includes a story summary, a discussion of themes and strengths of the book, and recommendations for next steps in the process.
  • In-line reactions, comments, and questions in the manuscript itself using Track Changes.
  • A follow-up Zoom call (30 minutes) to discuss the edit and any questions.

 

Manuscript Assessment

You can think of a manuscript assessment as a developmental edit “lite,” designed to be a more affordable alternative to a full developmental edit. It is also sometimes called a manuscript evaluation. Whether you book an assessment or a developmental edit, you will receive the same depth and scope of critique on your work. The only difference is in the amount of feedback you receive. This service includes:

  • A close read-through of the full manuscript
  • An in-depth editorial letter (5–10 pages) of the overall impression and successfulness of the manuscript, including a tailored discussion of any specific concerns you might have.

 

Line Editing

Line editing is a step down from developmental editing, like a lens zooming in from the big picture to paragraph and sentence level. With this kind of editing, we focus on flow and clarity, with the priority being placed on enhancing the writer’s voice and elevating the story through strong writing. This service includes:

  • A marked-up manuscript with edits made using Microsoft Word’s Track Changes feature, allowing you to see exactly what has been revised and giving you the power to accept or reject any changes.
  • A 2-page editorial letter
  • A thorough style sheet that lists all of the unique names and terms in your manuscript to ensure that they are consistently rendered throughout the book.
  • Extensive line-level revisions that strengthen your writing and refine sentences to improve your manuscript and your writing skills.
  • A review pass for you to look over the edits and ask questions directly on the manuscript.

Copyediting

Copyediting is a close and thorough critique that delves into the mechanics of your work. In the process of editing, this kind of edit should ideally take place just before proofreading—that is, when the manuscript is just about finished and is just in need of a last polish. This service includes:

  • In-line corrections that bring your work to a professional and high quality standard using Microsoft Word’s Track Changes features, allowing you to see exactly what has been revised and giving you the power to accept or reject any changes.
  • A thorough style sheet that lists all of the unique names and terms in your manuscript to ensure that they are consistently rendered throughout the book.
  • A review pass for you to look over the edits and ask questions directly on the manuscript.

Quick Critiques

I offer critiques on your first 500 words or your first ten pages. For the ten-page critiques, a follow-up Zoom call to discuss the feedback is included. For both kinds of critique, you’ll receive 2 pages of feedback touching on the following categories:

  • positive aspects
  • elements for attention and improvement
  • character development
  • plot structure
  • langauge/diction
  • voice
  • next steps

Submission Packages

I also offer reviews on submission materials, including query or cover letters, synopses, and first ten pages. If needed, I can help you identify good comp titles and craft an author bio. A good letter and synopsis are created through a process of asking questions and making comments, so I include two rounds of revisions in this service. After you make changes, I will review them again and send you any remaining edits and comments.

 


Professional Experience

My website

LinkedIn

  • Bachelor’s Degree: English Literature
  • Master’s Degree: English with specialization in Creative Writing
  • Visiting Scholar: studied at Oxford University
  • Published Writer: freelance articles, short stories, poetry
  • SCBWI Volunteer: Presenter for several Connect and Critique meetings and Co-Registrar for RMC Letters & Lines Conference 2022 and 2023
  • 10+ years experience in editing fiction and nonfiction
  • 5+ years of university tutoring and teaching experience across the curriculum
  • Copyeditor for Japan Harvest (official print publication for Japan Evangelical Missionary Association)

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